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Friday, 26 October 2018

Curious kiwi


Hello back guys this term we have been learning about the slj prep today is the second slj prep its about giving curious kiwi a book to read on his trip and I chose this book for him to read and heres why
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  1. Mrs Day6 November 2018 at 11:35

    Hi Ellias
    I really like way you have set out this post. The different coloured and shaped text boxes work well to make for an interesting blog.
    The book you have suggested for curious kiwi to read sound quite funny.
    Imagine being a pirate and not being able to swim.
    During the holiday I really enjoy reading, so I hope curious kiwi does too.
    When writing another blog post you might want to use some more full-stops. Short sentences can make your writing a little bit easier for a reader to read, they can add to the excitement too.
    Looking forward to reading more of your posts

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