
that's the end of this post-bye.
I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi Elias
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing some writing about your comic strip. You have a very detailed plot planned out and I like how you went back in after the art portion to share a photo of your work so far.
Next time, focus on the writing of your blog post and making sure you have capital letters and full stops in the correct places. That would improve the overall effectiveness of your blog.
- Miss Birtch